By Adele Annesi
Word for Words is by author Adele Annesi. For Adele's website, visit Adele Annesi.
In
the era of cell phones, tablets and microcomputers, writing longhand may not
come naturally or easily, but there are benefits to mind, body and story.
One
benefit of writing by hand is a closer mind-body connection. Using a favorite
pen and journal to record ideas, to expand later or just for yourself in the
moment, slows the thought process and gives the mind an outlet for those
thoughts through tactile sensation. The benefits of list writing, for example,
include more than just creating reminders; they also include a sense of
release, from the moment the first item appears on the page.

Writing longhand
also helps minimize and even eliminate distractions. Not only are you not
online (at least not directly), you’re also focusing more directly on the page
and the written word. This degree of concentration slows the writing process to
enable your imagination to more fully envision and record images, which can
lead to better-developed concepts, scenes, characters and stories.
When writers
concentrate more fully on their work, they also become better writers, because
they’re more aware in real time of their word choices and the effects of those
choices. This is called “listening to the work” and trains the writer’s ear to
hear the differences between, for example, active and passive voice, and to
notice the betterments of using fewer and more precise words to tighten and
strengthen stories, whether fictional or real life.
When writers take time to
“hear” to their work, they also focus less on fixing it, which yields greater
freedom to explore a theme or topic in organic way. When we’re not continually
in editing mode, we give ourselves a chance to discover what works in our
writing, what doesn’t and why. As a result, we gain mastery over our work and
confidence. This helps us learn faster. So if you like to learn by doing and by
trial and error, as I often do, longhand is a great way to gain, use and
increase your knowledge.
Of course, there are also clear benefits to using a
device for writing. First, the process produces text faster and easier than
writing longhand. Most programs even correct you as you write, and you can use
the program’s spellcheck, grammar check and thesaurus without stepping away
from your work. Once you create a piece, it’s a lot easier to save and upload
it to work on later, virtually anywhere (pun intended). Of course, you can
carry a pen and paper nearly anywhere, too, but it’s hard to beat the
convenience of a device to create, edit, save and rework a writing project.
These advantages make devices more than convenient for creating first drafts
and meeting deadlines.
In reality, you don’t have to make a once-for-all choice
of longhand or device for your writing. Each style or project tends to create
its own parameters, such as time constraints, energy level, type or style of
writing, personal preference and mood.
When I was growing up, for example, I
preferred writing longhand for journal entries and poetry. I still do. There’s
something inherently pleasing about opening a journal, especially a new one,
taking out a favorite pen and sitting down to write on a pristine page, like
first footsteps in snow. For me, it’s a way to uncover and explore my thoughts
and emotions, especially when something is happening in my life that I want to
examine. Those instances deserve the human touch, through sufficient time and
close attention.
Whether we write
fact, fiction or both, pain informs and can enhance our work. To make the most
of what we’ve endured, however, we must be mindful of what and how we write.
Many
artists create their best pieces from the pyre of suffering. Beethoven went
deaf at 45; Georgia O'Keeffe struggled with depression. Author David Foster
Wallace struggled with depression and addiction. Artists work through their
pain, around it, with it, from it. To make the most of what we’ve endured, we might
consider the advice of author Dorothy Sayers in her essay “Why Work?”, and
allow our experience to “serve the work”.
Born in Oxford, England, Sayers is
best known for her Lord Peter Wimsey mysteries, but in all endeavors Sayers believed
that while many feel that work, in whatever form, ought to serve the community,
there is a “catch” in this line of thinking. Her reasoning as a person of faith
was that there is a “paradox about working to serve the community”, and there are
three reasons why this is true. First, a person can’t “do good work if you take
your mind off the work to see how the community is taking it.” Second, “the
moment you think of serving other people, you begin to have a notion that other
people owe you something for your pains; you begin to think that you have a
claim on the community.” Third, if you aim to serve the community, “you will
probably end by merely fulfilling a public demand—and you may not even do that.”
In her book The Forest for the Trees: An
Editor's Advice to Writers, Betsy Lerner made a similar observation about
checking the community pulse on what to write. “People who try to figure out
what’s hot and re-create it are as close to delusional as you can get. Once a
trend is actually identified it is usually too late; your work will be regarded
as opportunistic, as jumping on the bandwagon…” While some writers may be altruistic
enough not to consider the potential return on their investment before they
start writing, once a thing is written and received, or not—for the community
is not awaiting with baited breath the words of the writer’s imagination—that is
the moment when the writer realizes just how much of what he or she has written
was not for the work—meaning the integrity of the project—but for the sake of a
response. Even where there is a legitimate public demand for treatment of a
particular topic, where is the artistry in putting the cart before the horse?
So
what about us? Should we write of our painful experiences? If so, how?
Moreover, why? If we do decide to explore a difficult experience, should there be
parameters or guidelines to enable our writing to benefit us and others without
bringing harm?
I know a writer with a chronic health condition who eventually
decided to record the experience via an essay on a national website. What made this
person write of the condition and share it that way? First, in researching the
topic, the writer learned of alternative medicine options whose treatments were
helpful. This made the writer think, if these helped me, they could help
others. Since the information wasn’t yet mainstream, efforts to surface it did
help others. Just as important, maybe more so, by that time the writer was
talking about the topic with friends and family. In other words, the time was
right, not just for the topic but for the writer.
I also know a writer who
wrote about sexual assault and found that writing about the incident helped her
and others. So what made her take this big step? First, she was inspired by the
bravery of one of her students to write of a similar instance. Second, she
tested the story on friends before sharing it widely. Surprised at how many
people echoed her experience and encouraged her, she gained confidence that sharing
it widely could help still more people: those who have endured sexual assault
and close to them. In this example, the steps she took were both incremental
and affirming.
These two examples, both about writing nonfiction, share several
commonalities:
- The writer wrote not only for personal gain but also for others.
- The writer selected a trustworthy medium related to the topic.
- The writer wrote
the story when the time was right, and first put the writing aside to consider
what to do with it before sharing it.
- The writer had a trusted friend, someone
with firsthand experience, read the work before the piece was sent and shared.
- The
writer tested the experience on a smaller local audience before going global.
Once on the web, it’s forever, or at least it feels that way.
If you don’t want
to write about a painful experience directly as nonfiction, you might consider
fictionalizing it. One way to do this is to consider the emotional truth of what
happened. In other words, what was the lesson learned, and how might it become
the theme of a poem, flash fiction, a short story or a novel? If you write fiction
and have been through a difficult experience, and the further one goes along in
life, the more one goes through, you might allow your experience to inform, not
dictate, the work or its direction. The points above regarding nonfiction
writing also apply to fiction.
There’s no rule that says a writer has to write
about a painful experience and share it with others. We can write about what
happened and decide not to share it. Either
way, what we write, how we write it and who we are because of what we’ve been
through can be enhanced by what we’ve experienced.