|A POV change deepens your fiction|
John walked into the crowed room and looked around at the unfamiliar faces. How could he make a personal call in front of all these people?
He edged into the crowded room. He couldn't make the call now, not with everyone listening.
You may not revise your entire story to reflect the new POV, but revising a pivotal scene will reveal and enrich your character, and your story. The approach also works for going from one gender to another, and one age or stage of life to another.
What story are you writing that could benefit from a deeper main or key secondary character?
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