Our world has a lot going on. No surprise there. But stepping back, we could say that our very big (or very small) world has four main components—people, place, period, populace. Depending on the genres we write in, these may not look anything like what we see on earth, but we still need to fully develop each part, for ourselves and our readers.
People
While we’re using the word people
here, fiction can comprise any type of living being. One writer created a story
world where flowers were the life representatives. Ask these questions when creating
and developing the beings in your story:
- What types of beings will inhabit my story world?
- Which characteristics will they share and which will differentiate them?
- What does “life” mean in my story and to those in it?
- How will my characters depend on each other and themselves?
- To what degree will those in my story change, evolve, grow, die, remain the same?
- What effects will these realities have on them and their world?
- How will I address ethnicity, race, diversity, and how does this connect to what my story is about?
Place
Where your
story happens can be cosmic and epic, small as a mouse hole, visible or
invisible, or anything in between. Here’s what to consider about the place(s) where
your story happens:
- Where is my story set? Is it urban, suburban, rural, a combination?
- How well do I know the setting(s)?
- What research do I need to do, and where can I go to find approximations of my setting?
- Why have I chosen these places, and how will they impact the story and those in it?
- How does place fit the theme of my story, what the story is about?
- Does it fit the scope or size of the story?
- Does the setting serve as a metaphor for the theme?
- What is the landscape of my story; what does/do the location(s) look like?
- How will I connect place with those who inhabit it?
Period
On the surface, the
choice of when the story is set seems simple. The three basics are past,
present, future. But there’s a lot to consider here, too, such as:
- Will I choose only one of these or work with more than one?
- Why am I making these choices?
- How will the time(s) when the story is set effect the characters and plot?
- How well do I know this era?
- If I’m not familiar with it or am constructing one from scratch, what do I need to learn to accurately depict it?
- What does this period look like, meaning the architecture?
Populace
In this case,
populace means society and culture. Of all the components, this is perhaps the
most intricate and the one most shaped by and responsible for shaping the
others. Key components of society include education, freedom, maturity,
customs, traditions, languages, values, governance, styles of dress, art, and
how wisdom and information are passed along. Here are considerations when
building this very important aspect of your story world:
- What place does education have in my story world, and how does it impact life in my story?
- How free is the culture, and will this element improve or decline? How is freedom defined in this story?
- How advanced is the culture, and will it evolve or devolve?
- What are the story’s customs and traditions, and how do these impact those in my story?
- Which languages are spoken, and to what degree do these connect people, separate them, both?
- What are the culture’s values, and where do they come from? Will they change? If so, how? And what effects will this have on the story and people?
- What style of governance does my story world have, and how does this impact life and story?
- What are the styles of dress and art, and how do these reflect those in my story and their values?
- How are wisdom and information passed along, for example, in oral tradition, advanced technology, written form? What do these forms look like?
Answering
Tough Questions
The aspects of our world are many and complex. The four
main categories of world-building—people, place, period, populace—and the questions
surrounding them are meant to stir our imagination as writers so that we create
detailed, believable story worlds that captive readers and make us better,
deeper writers.
Tips
To personalize and deepen your mapping strategy, add
questions of your own. When making choices, ask yourself why you’re making them.
The answers to this question, possibly more than any other, will help get you
where you want to go.
Resource: Steering the Craft, by Ursula Le Guin, a guide to sailing the sea of story.
Happy writing!
Adele Annesi is an award-winning writer, editor and teacher. Her new novel is What She Takes Away (Bordighera Press, 2023). Adele was managing editor of Southern Literary Review and has taught writing for Westport Writers’ Workshop. She received her MFA from Fairfield University. Adele’s long-running blog for writers is Word for Words. Her website is Adele Annesi. For questions, email Word for Words.
