By Adele Annesi
Word for Words is by author Adele Annesi. For Adele's website, visit Adele Annesi.
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| Portrait of an artist |
It's been said, including here by authors like Peter Selgin (see "Essential Conversations on Creativity: Style With Peter Selgin"), that good reading makes good writing. It's also true that your characters are only as good as what you've read to prepare for writing them.
Like a method actor preparing to play a part, reading to portray a character is key, as I'm learning even more in the low-residency MFA in Creative Writing Program at Fairfield University under mentor Pete Nelson, author of I Thought You Were Dead. Nelson's reading suggestion for an artist character I'm creating was Joyce Cary's The Horse's Mouth.
I like this selection because the book is older, not well-known, to me anyway, and the writing is superb. Yet, not even these qualities are enough. Horse's Mouth portrays artist Gulley Jimson from the inside out.
Here's just some of what I learned:
- Cary uses partial descriptions in scenes to show how an artist might see them.
- His dialogue is clipped, as an artist may hear people speak because he's looking at other things. It's also compressed, as if the artist wants to finish the conversation and get back to work.
- When an artist first becomes aware of his surroundings, he interprets it roughly, as a sketch.
- Past relationships are precious, because artists often move through their days without lasting intimacy: It's all about the work.
- Artists create their work from bits of life, sense memories. Good artists are brutally honest.
- I also appreciated that this book is a novel, not nonfiction, which means the story has a more organic feel, which guards against the wooden result that can come from too much research. Now, to put all this into practice.
Tip: What main character are you creating who could benefit from a good story about the same type of person? Visit your local library, LinkedIn or writing group, and ask who's read a lesser-known work that pertains to the same character type. As you read, record what you learn.
The topic of discussion at this week's Ridgefield Writers Guild meeting was e-publishing — whether to, how to, when to — you name it. One take-away was the importance of selecting an e-publisher that offers good editing services. E-publishing author and expert Shawn Wilhelm (aka Tarah Scott) made the point that at some stage in a writer's career — probably the earlier the better — it's important to work with an editor whom the writer is not paying directly. And you're hearing that from someone who makes a living editing.
The point is that an editor whom you're paying, who's not part of a publisher's stable of editors — freelance or otherwise — instantly has a vested interest in making you, the writer, happy. That usually means the editor is less likely to be completely impartial about your work — and your mistakes. E-publishing authors listed having a good editor as the most important facet of their writing.
Whether you opt to self-publish, e-publish or traditionally publish your work, the same principle applies — a good editor is worth her weight in gold.
Happy writing — and editing!
Resources: Preditors and Editors and Manuscript Editing
